For this week I needed to create a style sheet for my online bank brand to present to my class to receive feedback on my work so far.

Something what was mentioned a few times for feedback was to include secondary colours, which was something I have been thinking about but wasn't sure where to add it into my ‘Mock ups’ and thought it would be more for the app itself.

I was also asked on how my bank is specifically for University students which I received feedback on how I can make my app appeal to students more, such as elements in the app such as different sections for different things such as work income, different finances (car, uni, where you live etc). This is similar to what my original idea was but this would only be clear on the app itself as I was not sure how I would present this on the style sheet.

The tone of voice was also seen as too professional corporate, where I was aiming for a professional friendly tone so this is something I will need to experiment with to get it right.

My word mark was also questioned on if the U and the n being joined was intentional or not, which it is. I really like the two lettered being joined as it reflects back to the name ‘Unify’. Once I said that it was on purpose my classmate then said now that they know its on purpose they really liked it that way. But was it got questioned I may change it for even spacing for all letters. My lecturer also spotted small imperfections in my word mark on the baseline which I will fix.

Overall I am very happy with my feedback as I now know what I can work on to improve on to enhance my work.